Open Poetry #43 |
Big Black Purses- Huan Yi's Chal. |
Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Big Black Purses Old women, Big black purses, They steal memories, In their big black purses. Those smells of my grandfather... I am afraid that his smell Will disappear within The big black purses Ever present In my heart. -Juju -Juju -"So you found a girl Who thinks really deep thougts What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos [This message has been edited by Juju (12-08-2008 11:30 AM).] |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
ah...the chi of it all...cool write |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Miss juju, Excellent. Those big black purses look silly, I think. -Paul Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Juli, This is a nice poem in a neat shape. Do you have anything I might like in that big, black purse. It's getting around that time of year you know. Love Bobby |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Thank you for your comments everyone. Thanks Robert for your comment, I thought the image of shop lifting old ladies would amuse you. Juju -Juju |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Big black purses are like caves...they can hide a multitude of things in the dark recesses. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hmm, I best take a peak in my own big, black purse and see what treasures may lie within. Linda |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
This made me laugh, Juju. Everybody knows that whatever they need, I have it in my purse and my friends and family tease me about it...until they need something. This is a clever little poem, I like it. Ida |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Good Juju, I think Grandfather is safe with you John . |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yes dear Juli, Bones Mom always did have good taste in "stuff". Bobby |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Hi Juju, I don't see many of the big black purses anymore, you are lucky still to have the memories of your Grandfather, the smells and times, really no one will steal them but time itself, I wish I had some of your memories having never really known my Grandparents, I was born in Australia and they lived in Holland. One day I may meet some of my family over there or maybe not. The black purse gave my muse an open door and a voice to speak Juju, thank you for that. Keep your heart warm and your memories guarded, have a great day my friend. Rick |
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