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Open Poetry #43

Love

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2008-12-08 08:30 PM

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Someday soon—

After
The both of us
Are gone

Some unknowns
Will rummage around

My books
And art
Your astrology cards

Your Ouija board
That never raised
The dead

That stupid
Ridiculously expensive
Wire hanger pyramid

And then
My Love

The world
Will know

.

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

1 posted 2008-12-08 09:17 PM

So lovely. Your right.

-Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

2 posted 2008-12-08 09:36 PM

it is the 'common' that love is deeply rooted...you have drawn it so ably...but then, there is nothing common about it at all

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

3 posted 2008-12-09 12:22 PM

Or.........they may see this poem, and short-cut the whole process. They'll just know.

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latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

4 posted 2008-12-09 02:38 AM

So the question is: Do we save old love letters or burn them now? "late"

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