Open Poetry #43 |
I Lose Myself |
Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
In the misty moonlight at the waters edge I turn to look at you And O O the urge to kiss you is so overwhelming that for a moment it takes my breath away Then I see the look the love in your eyes and I know to the very depths of my soul that in your arms is where I want to be And I lose myself in that look I lose myself in that love You give me back my breath with a kiss soft as the mist that veils the moon And I lose myself I lose myself in you |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hi Paula, this is a nice poem, love is a beautiful door. yann |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wonderfully romantic, Paula. Love, Margherita |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
being swept away is so magical yes, very romantic! really enjoyed this |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
such a dreamy, 'take-my-breath-away' romantic write...enjoyed |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey Paula I see you're just as romantic as ever. Keep on breathing into that kiss and the hug it's worth millions.........of pounds of love. Eric |
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