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Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
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missouri

0 posted 2008-12-06 04:32 AM



In the misty moonlight
at the waters edge
I turn to look at you

And O O the urge to kiss you
is so overwhelming that
for a moment
it takes my breath away

Then I see the look
the love
in your eyes
and I know to the
very depths of my soul
that in your arms
is where I want to be

And I lose myself
in that look

I lose myself
in that love

You give me back
my breath
with a kiss
soft as the mist
that veils the moon

And I lose myself
I lose myself
in you

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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
1 posted 2008-12-06 04:42 AM


Hi Paula, this is a nice poem, love is a beautiful door.

yann

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
2 posted 2008-12-06 05:39 AM


Wonderfully romantic, Paula.

Love,
Margherita

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with you
3 posted 2008-12-06 10:09 AM


being swept away is so magical

yes, very romantic! really enjoyed this

steavenr
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4 posted 2008-12-06 02:50 PM


such a dreamy, 'take-my-breath-away' romantic write...enjoyed
ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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5 posted 2008-12-06 02:53 PM


Hey Paula I see you're just as romantic as ever.
Keep on breathing into that kiss and the hug it's worth millions.........of pounds of love.

Eric

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