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i_am_patch!
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0 posted 2008-12-06 01:50 PM



"forever"

walk a while with me,
this will be the last time.
mark your footprints in my life
so that i may not forget
that once upon time,
we travelled together,
hand in hand..

sit a while with me,
this wont take so long.
warm me with your life
so that i will always know
that once upon a time
you moved me,
and made me whole.

spend a little while with me,
this will remain in my memory.
touch my heart completely
so that i'll always remember
how you once touched my life,
you'll be a part of me..
forever.

   "omnia vincit amor"
LOVE OVERCOMES EVERYTHING

© Copyright 2008 Abegail Matias Bernas - All Rights Reserved
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Gaia
1 posted 2008-12-06 02:16 PM


A warm offering, nicely presented.
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2 posted 2008-12-06 03:15 PM


love the conversational tone of this...its repetetive resolutions...very well done...an excellent read
i_am_patch!
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3 posted 2008-12-06 04:00 PM


it's the time of the year to remember the love i lost,,,

he walked out my life just like that..

5 years ago,a day very much like today.

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