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The girl that they all know!
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The girl that they all know! |
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freeand2sexy Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704CA, USA |
What can you really understand These problems that I face To face the truth of who I am The truth I soon embrace What can you see inside my eyes A sparkle will only show But behind it's perfect disguise A girl who's all alone I can see what you see A personality they all know A person I pretend to be Cuz I can't face, that I'm on my own Why do you think this love is enough To get through all my pain Without my soul giving up Or allowing my mind to turn insane What emotions do you bare To know that this may not last That in the future, when I'm there I might regret this past What do you see inside of me Do you blind yourself from my lies Take a step into reality And open up your eyes What can you really comprehend These issues aren't your own This won't last unless I pretend I'm the girl that they all know I love pancakes!!! [This message has been edited by freeand2sexy (12-04-2008 07:08 PM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
this is a very good write...filled with what seems personal pain, very well exposed, very well explained... |
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