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Open Poetry #43

Darling Its You

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2008-12-03 06:19 PM

Darling Its You

I want to
eat malasada's
with you.
I want to
taste your kiss.
I want to
see a smile
on your face...
Darling its you,
its you darling
that I miss.

JamesLee
03December
2008

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2008-12-03 07:40 PM

Yo James,

This love poem works for me. It's very good work.

Bobby

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

2 posted 2008-12-03 11:23 PM

your words drip the passion of your heart...nice write

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

3 posted 2008-12-04 01:35 AM

So sweet, James. I can feel your longing. It's hard to be so far apart, I am sure.

Hugs to you,
Alison

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2008-12-04 08:01 AM

mmmmmmmmm I went searching for malasadas and what I have found no doubt pleases me. Must be a sweet and sensual moment to enjoy them with your darling, dear James.

Lovely!

Love,
Margherita

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