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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2008-12-02 06:40 AM



you probably wore jeans most of the time
and pretended I was more then I seamed
as you adjusted the length of your legs
and laughed at my expression's suggestion

about picking up leaves in autumn
one by one knowing there were millions
and you would be bending for hours
right in front of my refusal to assist

when there was a rake there in my hands
and I could be your latest hero
while you sipped your cocoa and smiled
and waited for my eyes to return again

but then I guess it hit you suddenly
and you put the rake in your shed
and asked me just to watch you longer
and think those things you knew I did

then teach them all to you a little later


___________

daark


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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2008-12-02 07:06 AM


mmm... somehow I just know you would make a good teacher Mr Daark...   love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

suthern
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2 posted 2008-12-02 09:52 AM


you would be bending for hours
right in front of my refusal to assist

Sassily sensual... and delightful! *S*

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
3 posted 2008-12-02 10:06 AM


"and I could be your latest hero"

we all are looking for that

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2008-12-02 10:09 AM


ms r&b..thanks lady!!


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ms suthern, you smile me, thanks so much


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lady slick..I did just by a costume..thank you babe

Margherita
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Eternity
5 posted 2008-12-03 04:43 PM


you bring young girl smiles into my grannie days!

Cute and charming.

Love,
Margherita

Alison
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Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-27
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6 posted 2008-12-04 02:01 AM


D

I'd like to burn those leaves right up.  My thoughts always wander when I read your poetry.  I think I have an ADD problem and my mind starts taking pictures from your words.

A

amusemi
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A State of Disarray
7 posted 2008-12-04 03:16 AM


Makes me want to take up landscaping...
Dark Stranger
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West Coast
8 posted 2008-12-04 06:03 AM


ms mar..thanks lady!!


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ms ali-san..ADD? I do know a cure to that..thanks babe


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ms amuse...thank you for the smile sides

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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Ohio
9 posted 2008-12-04 07:54 AM


would love to play with you in the piles of them here..theyre all gathering for some autumn hoedown......  
Dark Stranger
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Posts 13631
West Coast
10 posted 2008-12-04 08:24 AM


ms inky..can visualize us disturbing them..turning them every which way but loose..thanks babe
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