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FNG
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0 posted 2008-12-02 11:48 PM


I have always wondered why.
Among the creed,
I'm the most unpopuplar me.

Not vieing to be Miss Congeniality,
just a place where I can fit.

I rewind the films in my head.
Indeed,
it's me who bake this fate.

If I could push a pause,
before a mishapen befall.
I wouldn't be this scorched,
in this game call 'who's pops'!

Perhaps I have myself to blame.
For this tussle and russle game.
Not too brazen and bold...
Lest I'll be given the red card call.

Often sprinkle with some ingratiation,
Concoct with bits of sweet sugar flattery.
Is a sure shot at being more popular,
in this game call 'who's pops'!

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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1 posted 2008-12-03 04:37 PM


You wonder beautifully!

In being coherent to oneself there lies true charm, let the games be games, and remain who you are. Popularity doesn't always rhyme with quality.

Love,
Margherita

FNG
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since 2006-02-07
Posts 477

2 posted 2008-12-04 01:32 AM


Margherita,

Im So glad to see your reassurance...a constant struggle for me to be true...i sure hope i can do it one day, to be out of the game and not be bothered whether im popular or not...

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