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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2008-12-03 06:07 PM



Dear God


Ever since I've known her
she's been the sweetest woman to me.
By her disposition I know
how sweet a woman can be.
Dear God I pause to thank You
for a woman so sincerely sweet.
She's the sweetest woman
I've had occasion to meet.


JamesLee
02December
2008



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Margherita
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1 posted 2008-12-03 06:11 PM


Dear JamesLee, I am sure she has similar pauses of gratitude for you and God smiles in joy, no doubt.

Delightful.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

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2 posted 2008-12-04 02:05 AM


James,

You make me smile.

Alison

Rick
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3 posted 2008-12-04 07:12 AM


James, this was very nice my friend, a lovely statement to God and wonderful tribute to women on this earth.

Rick

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2008-12-04 06:13 PM


Thank you Margherita, Alison and Rick for the wonderful responses...James
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