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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2008-12-03 06:32 AM



Little Dreams

last night
in darkness
I looked
to the sky
and saw
all the wishes
that hang there
in twinkle

"no darkness has ever been deep enough to extinguish my personal knowledge of love"  Anne Rice



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Dark Stranger
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1 posted 2008-12-03 08:31 AM


all of them?  enjoyed it ms
inkedgoddess
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2 posted 2008-12-03 08:31 AM


hanging in twinkle
waiting to come of age
some still do
thankfully

OwlSA
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3 posted 2008-12-03 11:01 AM


Delightful poem and Christmas sky decorations.

- Owl

Honeybunch
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4 posted 2008-12-03 11:19 AM


Yes, waiting for someone to pull them down and give them life but just too far away!  Well said!

Helen

Margherita
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Eternity
5 posted 2008-12-03 01:16 PM


Reach out and pluck them, after setting your priorities.

This is very lovely!

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

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6 posted 2008-12-03 02:13 PM


a lovely image of lasting dreams...nice
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7 posted 2008-12-03 02:22 PM


You did?   Did you see mine?
Bill Charles
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8 posted 2008-12-03 02:32 PM


1slick_lady - many wishes there I'm sure, may they come true...

BC

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9 posted 2008-12-04 12:40 PM


Oh, be careful of those little dreams.....they grow up to be big dreams!

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Oklahoma Rose
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10 posted 2008-12-04 07:14 AM


I hope all your dreams come true.
Rick
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11 posted 2008-12-04 07:27 AM


I enjoyed your words here, thank you for sharing.

Rick

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12 posted 2008-12-04 12:44 PM


This poem is a delight, Helen. More to it than meets the eye.
                                 Ida

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in the shadows
13 posted 2008-12-04 01:59 PM





They twinkle for you!


Mark Bohannan
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14 posted 2008-12-04 02:58 PM


You captured volumes in this short piece and to think that in so few words, you gave us all a chance to see hours of impartment.  Wonderful


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15 posted 2008-12-04 05:05 PM


Few words, big impact. *S* This one went straight to my heart. *S*
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