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Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2008-12-03 02:11 PM



Is it wrong
To paint my short nails
A dark, cranberry-red stain
Because I want you see
other things

-Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

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steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

1 posted 2008-12-03 02:25 PM


"I'm sure I should have gotten more from this", he ponders (as he bites his even shorter nails to the quick) and, then, wonders what he should have seen
Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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highways, & byways, for now
2 posted 2008-12-03 02:31 PM


Juju - painting your nails this color I would think is expressing you. I'm sure they would look well..

BC

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2008-12-03 04:30 PM


I love the thoughts behind this clever write.

As for the color, it depends ... at night they match darkness, in sunlight they cry out.



Love,
Margherita

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
4 posted 2008-12-03 04:37 PM


Yo dear Juli,

There is no right or wrong when it comes to painting nails.

It's as simple as that.

Nice little questioning poem.

Love Bobby

shortsleeves
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since 2008-10-19
Posts 125
Franklin Tennessee
5 posted 2008-12-03 05:17 PM


Other things express themselves in your question.
Great work!
Love,
Hal

viking_metal
Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.
6 posted 2008-12-03 05:50 PM


If I were to paint my nails,

I'd paint them electric blue.

I wonder why?


-Paul

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
7 posted 2008-12-05 07:04 PM


Nice...James
Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan
8 posted 2008-12-05 07:46 PM


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Good Juju


John


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