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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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sometimes on occasional fridays there was laughter in your voice like you had a smile on, on purpose and my mind would wonder of your hair with the sun playing copper on gold and how your eyes catch colors on fire I didn't notice your charms then any more then when my eyes were closed and I knew your woman skin as if in dancing and if you were a distance and I was travel covering the playful hands of thought with gloves that didn't fit our minds but I would always try them on again __________ daark [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (12-03-2008 12:49 PM).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
loved this D  felt very sentimental |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suesea..it is a special set of thoughts..thanks babe |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
never have to worry about being disappointed when reading your work--this jumped out at me: "covering the playful hands of thought with gloves that didn't fit my mind " ...stunning |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
steavenr..thanks guy!! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: I am in awe of your mind, dear D.! hills dancing ... dipped in sunset colors and freedom. Outstanding work! Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar..thank you for the summer side of your smile |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Yes please do try me on for size |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms inky..naughty looks so good on you, thanks babe |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
there was laughter in your voice like you had a smile on, on purpose I like this poem very much... especially the ending lines. *S* But the lines above? *S* I can't read them without smiling. *S* |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms suthern..making you smile is my bestest reward..thanks lady |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You know, when I first read this I wanted to express how much I loved it and that it is a keeper to treasure. And I did not respond because words just seemed trite. I love this. That is my response. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san..your treasure then it is...thanks babe |
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