Open Poetry #43 |
Bones At Robert's Wake |
Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
All the mothers are there, there’s not many fathers there, that’s the kind of family we are. Everyone comments on how good Robert looks. Bones can’t help but think: “Yeah, too damned good looking for his own good. It runs in the family.” Bobby |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
love the last line...nothing like the subtle to make one's point |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Steavenr, I'm afraid Bones and I were never very subtle. It's great you liked that line. Bobby |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
sad -Juju |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Juli, I'm pleased you found it sad. Wakes are always sad. Love Bobby |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Vandana, I'm very pleased you enjoyed the read. Love Bobby |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks James, I'm pleased you like it. Bobby |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Yes, this is sad. I would tuck a cookie in his pocket - one never knows when they might need a cookie on their journey. Alison |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Alison, For the cookie thought. However, you know how Bones is, he'd probably swipe that cookie right out of Robert's pocket. Love Bobby |
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