Open Poetry #43 |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
if I could have picked your name sound it would have been a highway one and I would still know your shoulders as my daily prayed for curveations my eyes would travel you in chariots pretending I was one with the gods or the pharaohs that had left their mummies and were tasting the wine of your wickedry as they too used your mountains first and then your valleys for their poems before bathing their eyes in your waters and writhing their shapes into your sand I would be the last to leave you then as you noticed me first in your line patient as the statues that lean against the wind of your breathing when you hold your breath to meet me _________________ daark |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"I would be the last to leave you then as you noticed me first in your line patient as the statues that lean against the wind of your breathing when you hold your breath to meet me " *goodness* this is so beautiful D |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Sometimes, I hold my breath while reading you...just waiting for the words that make me smile in admiration. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
I feel like I am reading a National Geographic from the dark side. (take that as a compliment) I do enjoy your prose. I wish I had the talent to make my words ring and dance as yours do, as they twist their way from your mind to ours, Maybe the J & C and a fine Cigar might help. Very much enjoy your writes. WT. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suesea..thanks babe..a pleasure to wear your eyes. ______________ ms susieC..I sure enjoy your touches and the smile after. ________________ WTB..thanks for the read and yes..a little J&C and a Cohiba do work magic |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
And this flows with beauty. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks ms ali-san |
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