Open Poetry #43 |
and there was |
Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I walk alone in dream Stripped Confused Cautious Surrounded by grey - directionless Ahead bursts of light draw me onwards towards unknown vistas unmapped futures My feet fall softly in echo of heartbeats Mists part and he is here coated in Joseph’s colours KA-BOOM! Rockets blaze Ribbons of prism light flow into me through me Clothed in garments of sunrise I am embraced Sheltered Protected from loneliness He smiles in welcome ahead is Joy Intimacy Friendship behind Loneliness Uncertainty Fear I stroke his mouth with my lips A cocktail, savoury and sweet sugar or salt Slowly – I turn away Retrace my past Familiar Safe Alone Always do more than is required of you George Patton |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Kethry, it's so good to find you back on these pages and with such a poignant, most beautiful write! Even a small caress of love's true essence, brings healing to a lonely heart. Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Ah, Keth... you've penned a gentle punch. *S* Exquisite crafting... and a reminder that sometimes, we craft our own hells. *S* Fantastic!! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Oh this sings to me! I love it! And with that deep analysis carefully logged, I'm going straight back to read it again -- right now. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
And I did! ....yep, it rang bells the second time, too. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
So glad you're you back, Kethry, and in fine form I see. Ida |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
It has been a long time since being able to read one of your works and I must say, this was a treat to read. My favorite part .... ---------------------------------- "My feet fall softly in echo of heartbeats Mists part and he is here coated in Joseph’s colours" ------------------------------------ and of course you know because that is where the color comes in. A wonderful read and treat to see you here. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Wow, Kethry, this is lovely! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Kethry, you're back with a BEAUTY of a write! I literally got all goosebumply! The entire poem was 'brilliant'! "Ahead bursts of light draw me onwards towards unknown vistas unmapped futures" Sending a warm hug and smiles across the miles, Linda |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
so many neat phrasings in this write, like this one: "coated in Joseph’s colours"...just love that one...enjoyed your very talented write |
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