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Sky stretcher
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Sky stretcher |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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She suffers with eyes both shut or wide, against the night's terrain its anticipated etchings that cease to write of caligraphy aborted on the sky's false promise its stalling clouds of bloom the rhymes ring hollow no accolades on centerstage she kneels. [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (12-04-2008 08:18 AM).] |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
drawn in by your exquisite title, captivated by your amazing words...going back in for more |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You just seem to get better and better writing this poetry stuff, Brooklyn lady. Alison |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Love the poem - hate your suffering! - Owl |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Ouu this one is a   ARCTIC WIND |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Michele - stopped by for a read, well done... BC |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
its stalling clouds of bloom You stretch poetry into delectable heights. Love, Margherita |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
You "stretched the sky" beautifully here, Michelle. ida |
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