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lucky
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0 posted 2008-12-02 01:22 AM



you.......!

have
just
entered
a moment in times
past that unfortunately last but a brief

moment it was lucky in that I had just finished taking
a few shots of the casual ease of dawn's drifting fog as she
crept along the dewy montaigne on her way down to blanket
the small plateau on which I live sweet mystique breath
hung on the cool brume my norwegian love had

again returned but then all of
a sudden a unique
phenomenon
took place the
quiet serene turned into

a swirling display and just couldn't be
neglected a faery appeared dancing along
the silver fringe twisting the pampered mist
it was as if the opaque fibers tailed her
apparition in a stringy aftermath
while she entertained
the silky fresh
of a new
dawns
innocence
dry stealthy timothy
still standing stalks swayed
to the autumn's early tease of
alteration at the very least a
grand moment
*


Speaking of ghosts, wouldn't you know here comes mine again...
~Rosemary J. Gwaltney~

[This message has been edited by lucky (12-02-2008 03:22 AM).]

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Alison
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1 posted 2008-12-02 03:32 AM


Okay, now I'll respond.

This is beyond beautiful.  The images remain in my head as I write this response to you.  Once I got the flow of thoughts, I just rode on your poetry.

Well done.  I wish I could do it.

Alison

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2 posted 2008-12-02 09:07 AM


lucky this is just beautiful
happy to have you home again
how is your lovely bride?
love to her too

Margherita
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3 posted 2008-12-03 04:46 PM


Thank you, dear lucky, for coming and sharing this magic moment with us.

Awesome. Something to enjoy more than once!

Love,
Margherita

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4 posted 2008-12-04 12:19 PM


Ah, Lucky -- your swoopy exhibitions may play hob with my dyslexia, but they're a joy to read!

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5 posted 2008-12-04 12:41 PM


Magick indeed, Lucky.
                  Ida

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