Open Poetry #43 |
a magic moment |
lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
you.......! have just entered a moment in times past that unfortunately last but a brief moment it was lucky in that I had just finished taking a few shots of the casual ease of dawn's drifting fog as she crept along the dewy montaigne on her way down to blanket the small plateau on which I live sweet mystique breath hung on the cool brume my norwegian love had again returned but then all of a sudden a unique phenomenon took place the quiet serene turned into a swirling display and just couldn't be neglected a faery appeared dancing along the silver fringe twisting the pampered mist it was as if the opaque fibers tailed her apparition in a stringy aftermath while she entertained the silky fresh of a new dawns innocence dry stealthy timothy still standing stalks swayed to the autumn's early tease of alteration at the very least a grand moment * Speaking of ghosts, wouldn't you know here comes mine again... ~Rosemary J. Gwaltney~ [This message has been edited by lucky (12-02-2008 03:22 AM).] |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Okay, now I'll respond. This is beyond beautiful. The images remain in my head as I write this response to you. Once I got the flow of thoughts, I just rode on your poetry. Well done. I wish I could do it. Alison |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
lucky this is just beautiful happy to have you home again how is your lovely bride? love to her too |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear lucky, for coming and sharing this magic moment with us. Awesome. Something to enjoy more than once! Love, Margherita |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Ah, Lucky -- your swoopy exhibitions may play hob with my dyslexia, but they're a joy to read! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Magick indeed, Lucky. Ida |
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