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2islander2
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0 posted 2008-11-29 08:29 AM


If you like human things
share what you like,
share the lovely smiles
that come from nowhere.


If you like human things
listen to what others say,
you will keep at heart
the trace of their passing.


Share what you mean
with no fear of the time,
if you like human things
you will cry sometimes.


If you like human things
when you listen you talk,
when you teach you learn,
it's all about human things.


[This message has been edited by 2islander2 (11-30-2008 08:44 AM).]

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Margherita
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1 posted 2008-11-29 09:19 AM


quote:
If you like human things
when you listen you talk,
when you teach you learn,
it's all about human things.


We are frail, we are strong, we are bold, we are shy ... we are human.

And you are so right, we are teachers to each other.

Another wise and beautiful offering, dear Yann.

Love,
Margherita



Marchmadness
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2 posted 2008-11-29 10:33 AM


You must be a great teacher, yann. I can see you are wise.
                               Ida

2islander2
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3 posted 2008-11-29 12:06 PM


Thank you Very much margherita for offering this poignant and beautiful comment.

hugs

yann

2islander2
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4 posted 2008-11-29 12:09 PM


Thank you Ida for the supporting comment.
Teaching is such a hard work where moments or happiness are prohibited cause inappropriate at working

have a nice day


yann

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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5 posted 2008-11-30 02:25 AM


Yann... a very insightful poem!  love it ... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

2islander2
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6 posted 2008-11-30 03:52 AM


Thank you dear Roniece, it is a lovely comment for beginning the day .

hugs

yann

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7 posted 2008-12-02 01:09 AM


yann,

This is wonderful.
I just saved it to my computer.

Thank you.
Alison

OwlSA
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8 posted 2008-12-02 11:40 AM


Lovely, Yann.  It is a pity there aren't a lot more Yanns in the world.

- Owl

2islander2
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9 posted 2008-12-02 02:27 PM


Thank you Alison, your comment touched me, you are great.


yann

2islander2
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10 posted 2008-12-02 02:28 PM


Thank you Owl, and more Owls too, smiles.

yann

OwlSA
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11 posted 2008-12-03 11:10 AM


Smiles and giggles at your reply to my reply, Yann!

- Owl

Bill Charles
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12 posted 2008-12-03 02:42 PM


2islander2 - if more would do what you write in this poem I'm sure things would be easier. Nice write...

BC

steavenr
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13 posted 2008-12-03 02:48 PM


loved it all, but especially your ending...nice
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