Open Poetry #43 |
Snowy Forest |
secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Snowy Forest Come walk this snowy forest (where truth lies nestled in the timelessness and moonlit shadows) with only your dreams as a compass and the moon as your pathfinder. Here all cares are ephemeral… puffs of mist vanishing o’er the Winter mere, where eternity beckons in the whispering wind. --- b. e. adams (11/27/08) |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Absolutely beautiful, and refreshing. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
"Where eternity beakons in the whispering winds." So serene and comforting. Ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I'd gladly walk this snowy forest you write about so beautifully, dear Bruce! Love, Margherita |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
*sigh* just beautiful Bruce! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Secondhanddreampoet, I've walked those snowy forests in Altoona. They extend all the way to the Artic Circle from there. Bobby |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Bruce, You write about the kind of snow that I miss. Where I grew up, the snow was deep and fluffy. The snow is different where I am now. It's fluffy for a bit maybe, but the moisture is sucked out and it becomes dry and squeeky to walk on. It's snowing lightly now and I see your poem in the woods beyond my window. I'll take the dogs out later and we'll think of you. Alison |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
what a pleasant picture you've drawn...now drawn to be there...a very nice place to be and to want to be...thank you for reminding us of a beauty some of have shared and many of us want to return to |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Bruce, you did a splendid job of capturing the essence of a snowy forest! ~ spiritual ~ transcendental ~ serenity ~ purity... and a Linda |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hi Bruce, I would so much like walking in this snowy forest, hearing the crispy steps and listen to ;the frozen silence...Thank you for the poem. yann |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Absolutely lovely, Bruce. - Owl |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
secondhanddreampoet - a great way to capture a snowy forest, nice write.... BC |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
with only your dreams as a compass and the moon as your pathfinder. You write a beauty that is breathtaking. *S* |
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SpheresOvIce New Member
since 2008-12-04
Posts 7 |
where truth lies nestled in the timelessness and moonlit shadows Absolutely brilliant, reminds me of something I would jot. Bravo for such a nich piece of reading. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Ahhh! Forests I know very well and am very much at home in - but snowy, I don't know - or rather, I didn't, until now, and I am so enjoying walking through this snowy forest, where cares drift away . . . - Owl |
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