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Oklahoma Rose
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0 posted 2008-11-25 04:12 PM


    



I wrote this about a man I had been sitting with, since June. He passed away on 11-23-08 about an hour and a half after I left. People have told me before, that I have an easy job. Well, you know what? My job is not easy at all. I showed this poem to his sister, and she called me , today, asking me if she can read this poem at His funeral. Of course, I told her she could.

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Margherita
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1 posted 2008-11-25 04:43 PM


Dearest Sue, what a compassionate, sensitive, loving, beautiful and touching write!!

You were a blessing to this man, and your generous heart and service have brought him wellbeing and joy in the last times of his earthly life.

I think no eyes will remain dry when his sister will read your poem.

(((((Sue))))) you don't have an easy profession, but what you do is ever so precious.

Love and hugs.
Margherita


amusemi
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2 posted 2008-11-25 08:18 PM


I am so sorry for your loss.  Such beautiful sentiment in this and it shows what a big heart you have.
1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
3 posted 2008-11-25 08:41 PM


you are a good woman sue
Marchmadness
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4 posted 2008-11-25 08:44 PM


How wonderful that you are able to write something like this,Sue, not only for your patient but for his family as well. It is a lovely and useful talent you have.
                              Ida

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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Sydney, Australia
5 posted 2008-11-26 06:19 AM


Dear sweet Sue.. you are so beautiful in what you do for others.. this is such a wonderful poem...I'm sorry for your loss.. love and hugs RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

LindsayP
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Australia, Victoria
6 posted 2008-11-28 11:15 PM



Dear Sue that is such a beautiful poem
that touches the heart strings, thank you so much for sharing this heartfelt poem with us all. My sympathy goes out to you and all the loved ones of that poor old man.

Lindsay

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2008-11-28 11:24 PM


Sue, I am all choked up again reading this
exceptionally moving poem. I know his passing has been difficult for you, however, my dear friend, I know in my heart of hearts that your caring ways will remain in his soul memory.

I'll be thinking of you tomorrow.

Love you,
Linda

Oklahoma Rose
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Oklahoma USA
8 posted 2008-11-29 10:05 AM


Margherita - I hope I was a blessing to him. I don't care what anyone says, this is not an easy job. For me, it is very, very hard to sit an watch someone who is dying, and not being able to do anything to stop it.

Amusemi - Thank you!

1slick_lady - Thank you for your kind reply.

Marchmadness - Thank you for your kind reply.

Roniece - Thank you! I try to be good and kind to everyone.

LindsayP - Thank you so much for you very kind reply.

Earth Angel - My dear sweet friend. Thank you for being there. As you know, I will be getting ready to leave for the funeral soon. This is so very hard. I hate goodbyes.


2islander2
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by the sea
9 posted 2008-11-29 11:59 AM


wonderful piece, It tells a lot about love.

regards

yann

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