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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 *** Sun eyes pierce darkness: kissed by the light clouds dissolve like pain at love's touch *** |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
*sigh* oh Magherita, all your lovely poetry makes me *sigh* in awe of your beautiful work.. this is just wonderful!! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
((((Roniece)))) thank you! Enjoy your week-end! Love, Margherita  |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Magherita, whilst the photo and the poem complement each other perfectly, and whilst the photo is beautiful, your words are so much more beautiful. And, by the way, a thought I had recently is that one excellent one-word definition - and specifically explanation - of love is "Margherita". - Owl |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
((((Diana)))) thank you! Your heart touch is deeply felt! You are an explosion of kindness and beauty. Love, Margherita |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hi Margherita, so true and beautiful, I definitly love the meatphor and will add this one to my library... have a nice day yann |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Gorgeous in both pen and picture! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
loved your sun eyes and how you wear then well |
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shortsleeves Member
since 2008-10-19
Posts 125Franklin Tennessee |
When I read your thoughts I only see the light of love in your eyes. Love, Hal |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
this is so good...especially liked this part: "dissolve like pain at love's touch" ...a truly lovely gem...fantastic write... |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you for your wonderful words, Margherita. I feel extremely honoured. I hope I deserve them. Smiles. Love and hugs Owl |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Beautiful picture, beautiful words and all by a beautiful Margherita. How blessed we are! Helen |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
This was penned so well and the picture is absolutely beautiful. Thanks it was refreshing. |
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nourzihane Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 254Algeria |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
beautifully said, this is when I look deep into each cloud, looking for images. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Beautiful in picture and beautiful in write Margherita, I enjoyed this today, thank you. Rick |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Margherita...Beautiful words from a beautiful heart. Enjoyed dear lady...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Margherita, This is an interesting picture. Do not look at the sun. Your words are true about love. Love Bobby |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you all for your generous and warm replies. Love, Margherita  |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Margherita, You so often touch me with the beauty of your poetry and your spirit. Love, Alison |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar...when you play with sunson this way it smiles me deeply |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dear Dolphina, I will recall your words whenever I see the sun peaking through a dark cloud ~ or piercing the darkness that may befall me. ~ "Sun eyes pierce darkness" And yes, love can dissolve one's pain ~ as your words so often do...   Angelo Terrestre |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Margherita - thanks for writing this so I could read it, lovely... BC |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
I know sun always means something for you. |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
Wow just Wow! That was so simple but so powerful and emotional at the same time! Beautiful piece!~ Rhia |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, my Poet friends, you are all so precious to me. Sun's caress is sweet: heart petals open in joy to its healing touch Love and sunshine! Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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