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Margherita
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0 posted 2008-11-22 01:08 AM



    


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Sun eyes pierce darkness:

kissed by the light clouds dissolve

like pain at love's touch


***


© Copyright 2008 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2008-11-22 01:13 AM


*sigh* oh Magherita, all your lovely poetry makes me *sigh* in awe of your beautiful work.. this is just wonderful!!  love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Margherita
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2 posted 2008-11-22 01:23 AM


((((Roniece)))) thank you! Enjoy your week-end!
Love,
Margherita

OwlSA
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3 posted 2008-11-22 01:54 AM


Magherita, whilst the photo and the poem complement each other perfectly, and whilst the photo is beautiful, your words are so much more beautiful.

And, by the way, a thought I had recently is that one excellent one-word definition - and specifically explanation - of love is "Margherita".

- Owl

Margherita
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4 posted 2008-11-22 01:57 AM


((((Diana)))) thank you! Your heart touch is deeply felt! You are an explosion of kindness and beauty.

Love,
Margherita

2islander2
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5 posted 2008-11-22 08:20 AM


Hi Margherita, so true and beautiful, I definitly love the meatphor and will add this one to my library...

have a nice day


yann

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6 posted 2008-11-22 09:24 AM


Gorgeous in both pen and picture!
inkedgoddess
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7 posted 2008-11-22 10:24 AM


loved your sun eyes
and how you wear then well

shortsleeves
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8 posted 2008-11-22 10:54 AM


When I read your thoughts I only see the light of love in your eyes.
Love,
Hal

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9 posted 2008-11-22 03:12 PM


this is so good...especially liked this part:

"dissolve

like pain at love's touch"

...a truly lovely gem...fantastic write...

OwlSA
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10 posted 2008-11-22 04:07 PM


Thank you for your wonderful words, Margherita.  I feel extremely honoured.  I hope I deserve them.  Smiles.

Love and hugs
Owl

Honeybunch
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11 posted 2008-11-22 04:43 PM


Beautiful picture, beautiful words and all by a beautiful Margherita.  How blessed we are!


Helen

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12 posted 2008-11-22 06:22 PM


This was penned so well and the picture is absolutely beautiful.  Thanks it was refreshing.


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13 posted 2008-11-23 04:35 AM



Magnus
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14 posted 2008-11-23 12:01 PM


beautifully said,  this is when I look deep
into each cloud,   looking for images.

Rick
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15 posted 2008-11-23 01:24 PM


Beautiful in picture and beautiful in write Margherita, I enjoyed this today, thank you.

Rick

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16 posted 2008-11-23 02:37 PM


Margherita...Beautiful words from a beautiful heart. Enjoyed dear lady...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

Robert E. Jordan
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17 posted 2008-11-23 05:54 PM


Yo Margherita,

This is an interesting picture.  

Do not look at the sun.

Your words are true about love.

Love Bobby

Margherita
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18 posted 2008-11-24 06:37 PM


Thank you all for your generous and warm replies.

Love,
Margherita

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19 posted 2008-11-26 01:58 AM


Margherita,

You so often touch me with the beauty of your poetry and your spirit.

Love,
Alison

Dark Stranger
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20 posted 2008-11-26 06:41 AM


ms mar...when you play with sunson this way
it smiles me deeply

Earth Angel
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21 posted 2008-11-27 01:59 PM


Dear Dolphina, I will recall your words whenever I see the sun peaking through a dark cloud ~ or piercing the darkness that may befall me.

~ "Sun eyes pierce darkness"

And yes, love can dissolve one's pain ~ as your words so often do...


Angelo Terrestre

Bill Charles
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22 posted 2008-11-27 04:58 PM


Margherita - thanks for writing this so I could read it, lovely...

BC

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23 posted 2008-11-27 06:29 PM


nice
poddarku
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24 posted 2008-11-28 09:24 AM


I know sun always means something for you.
rhia_5779
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25 posted 2008-11-28 01:27 PM


Wow just Wow! That was so simple but so powerful and emotional at the same time! Beautiful piece!~

Rhia

Margherita
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26 posted 2008-11-29 11:19 AM


Thank you, my Poet friends, you are all so precious to me.

Sun's caress is sweet:
heart petals open in joy
to its healing touch


Love and sunshine!

Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

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