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Residual Conceptions
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Residual Conceptions |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song 
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Residual Conceptions This conception . . . mirrored, in absence of touch regulates the minds embrace ~ offering ~ visible hopes between action and the contemplation that boundaries no longer exist unless . . . we mortar the first brick against a measured initiative ~ obtaining ~ Proficiency laced in literacy . . . built upon a plateau of awareness leaving a residual desire to acquire a new conception ~ reflected ~ in the eye of notions churning deep within a heart yearning for the challenge of another victory in repose to even an even higher mesa ~ pondering ~ Is it the shores of the oceans we navigate or the journey, that entices our senses Mark Christopher |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
A lot to ponder. Well written. Enjoyed. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
lots of nice word choices in this one...couple that with the fact that it leaves you thinking...nice write...will definitely be reading this one again... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Mark - there you go again, another fabulous write. Enjoyed the read... BC |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Wonderfully profound write. And I think it is the journey "that entices our senses". Very refined as always! Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"Is it the shores of the oceans we navigate or the journey, that entices our senses" Mark, this was my favorite, as it leaves the reader space to ponder and reflect. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I'm not sure... cause if we're very lucky, it's both. *S* Your words definitely do... this is fantastic! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
amusemi - Was just a thought. Thank you. steavenr - If it left you thinking that is a good thing. Thank you much. Bill- Thank you kind sir and always nice to have a visit from you. Margherita - I know for me it is the journey but I have to admit the curiosity of the shore also holds it's own in some respects. Thank you much. Midnitesun - We all need that space at times and I do thank you. Ruth - As do your bread and butter chips. Thank you much my "suthern" friend. [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (11-21-2008 01:24 PM).] |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
..."Is it the shores of the oceans we navigate or the journey, that entices our senses" oh... I especially liked the feeling of this part. Sensual write. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Kathleen - The Irish can find sensuality in all things in life. One of our blessings. I thank you much. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
..."literacy . . . built upon a plateau of awareness" ~ I like that idea of yours! But then that shouldn't surprise me!!   Linda |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Maga, Mia Maga~ How your words caress the shoulders of my recall~ In splendored awarness you touch me, where I have not been touched this day ... that is ... before this moment~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Linda - Always enjoy giving you a surprise if possible and happy you liked the idea. Thank you. Marge - A caress is a pleasure we should all be able to experience daily. Glad I could help with yours. Thank you my friend. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Your words make me reach and that is a good thing. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
inkedgoddess - Glad you enjoy reaching. Thank you. |
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