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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. The first frost Has been and gone For a long time now It seems to get Colder every year With the snow deeper Along the shores Leafless branches The withered fields A cold half moon Above the road A flight of geese In the night Passes overhead Calling to each other As they go . |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"A flight of geese In the night Passes overhead Calling to each other As they go" the sights, the sounds, the images...such a lovely painting of very special words...enjoyed...thank you for sharing your creativity |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Seems like a very serene scene to me. Ida |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Superb (American Zen) impressionistic slice of late November by the edge of Winter. most serious, sustained applause!! |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
nice |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
very enjoyable read loudly. Thank you for the good moment in poetry. yann |
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