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Open Poetry #43

Same Time Next Year

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2008-11-24 12:27 PM

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Perhaps
In twelve months
If the both of us
Are still alive
We’ll draw
A little nearer
To each other
Than we have before

And I again
Without using words
Will praise your hair
Your face in profile
The color of your eyes

And you surprised
That any man
Can still
Be a fool for you
May think for awhile
And smile

After all

What harm can come
From once a year
Being younger
Than we are

.

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

1 posted 2008-11-24 01:16 PM

very interesting 'slice of reality' write!

serious applause!!

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

2 posted 2008-11-24 02:30 PM

sometimes I just need a smile...this did it for me...thank you for sharing

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2008-11-26 11:44 AM

A happiness that comes only once a year is still a happiness... and to be treasured.

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2008-11-26 04:49 PM

delightful.

yann

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