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Open Poetry #43

Texas Girl, Let's Pretend Together.

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

0 posted 2008-11-26 09:45 AM

blue blue eyes, and texas tan skin.
brown hair that isn't thick like mine.
it might be normal thickness,
but I'm not entirely sure.
you probably straighten it,
so it looks that way.
I shave my head,
so that makes two of us.

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

1 posted 2008-11-26 10:58 AM

Interesting

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

2 posted 2008-11-26 11:00 AM

Thanks juju.

You're pretty interesting too.

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

3 posted 2008-11-26 02:10 PM

Paul,

Conventional English language punctuation and capitalization would keep this short piece from running together.

Bobby

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

4 posted 2008-11-26 05:42 PM

Robbus,

I usually don't get that far until after i've posted the poem up here. I'll fix er up.

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

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