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Open Poetry #43

All the Way to Our BVD's

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2008-11-24 09:37 PM

All the Way to Our BVD's

An emergency job came up when
a November storm rolled in
and the big boss man said
I need you men.
We got to get this
boat out on time,
our good reputation
is on the line.
Men I know its storming
like crazy but I need
you to stay and I'll sweeten
the pot with some overtime pay.
All of us were ready
to go home to our honeys,
come next week they'd
be spending our O.T. money.
But tonight it feels like we
have a creepy crawly disease,
we're wet from head to boots
all the way to our BVD's.

JamesLee
23November
2008

Ethan Halo
Senior Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 793
on the roof again

1 posted 2008-11-25 12:53 PM

thanks for braving the storm.

even though i wear hanes boxers with the comfort soft waistband... not bvd's. hahaha

The soul is oftentimes a battlefield where reason and judgement wage war on passion and appetite.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

2 posted 2008-11-25 04:52 AM

ok, ok, ok, I have no idea what BVD's are.. but I did so like your poem lovely James

love and hugs RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

nourzihane
Member

since 2008-07-10

Posts 254
Algeria

3 posted 2008-11-25 05:17 AM

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

4 posted 2008-11-25 09:47 AM

Yo James,

This is very fine writing. I got a kick out of it. It brings back cold, wet , memories.

Bobby

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