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Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2008-11-24 08:32 PM


What I See

© Copyright 2008 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
Juju
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In your dreams
1 posted 2008-11-24 09:08 PM


That was lovely you should totally slip this one secretly in her purse.

Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

amusemi
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A State of Disarray
2 posted 2008-11-24 09:32 PM


Beautiful!!!
inkedgoddess
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3 posted 2008-11-24 10:44 PM


this is pure beauty Bill style
LindsayP
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4 posted 2008-11-24 10:59 PM



Good one Bill, I think Juju has the right idea, she will love it.

Lindsay

Marchmadness
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5 posted 2008-11-25 01:59 AM


you do romance very well, Bill.
                              Ida

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
6 posted 2008-11-25 06:17 AM


lovely, Bill


M

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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7 posted 2008-11-25 06:35 AM


Bill Charles.. this is BEAUTIFUL!  love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
8 posted 2008-11-25 12:54 PM


Bill, I would wager that she sees the beauty in you as well. This one rings high on the sigh meter!

Now you have all the pip woman who read this show of love and appreciation ~ swooning!

May you always be loved as you do love!


Linda

steavenr
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9 posted 2008-11-25 02:16 PM


I was beginning to feel like the lone guy who saw the king with no clothes (took forever for the pic to load so that I was beginning to feel like others were seeing something that just wasn't there)  Now that I have seen it, it IS beautiful.  It IS a gem.  You ARE setting the romance bar so very high.  Thank you for being willing to share your talents...simply exquisite
jwesley
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10 posted 2008-11-25 03:15 PM


very kool!, my friend...

jimmy

Oklahoma Rose
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11 posted 2008-11-25 05:51 PM


Bill, this is absolutely beautiful. Both, the poem and the graphic.
Margherita
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Eternity
12 posted 2008-11-25 05:52 PM


Dear Bill, ohh that is so deeply romantic and precious in its essentiality.

The picture too is very lovely, ethereal.

And I also love the comments.
What more could one say?

It's good to have you back!

Love,
Margherita

Sharon Rose
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13 posted 2008-11-26 11:45 PM


Bill, enjoyed the romatic dance.
Pantheress
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14 posted 2008-11-27 12:52 PM


Beauitful, thank you
GG
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Lost in thought
15 posted 2008-11-30 11:53 AM


Every woman just longs to hear this.
Beautiful!

~alyssa

Hupomeno.

Patricia
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16 posted 2008-12-14 08:58 AM


So beautiful.

Patricia

Susan Caldwell
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17 posted 2008-12-14 09:01 AM


Oh I didn't miss that you have to look back.

beautiful and so sad Bill.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

2islander2
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by the sea
18 posted 2008-12-14 02:21 PM


That is wonderful.

yann

ethome
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19 posted 2008-12-16 12:38 PM


Lovely stuff Bill.
I see you haven't lost your touch.....

You ol romanticist you!

Eric

JamesMichael
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20 posted 2008-12-16 05:07 PM


Fine romantic writing...James
vandana
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21 posted 2008-12-16 05:32 PM


nice read
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