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Sultry Voice of Fog
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Sultry Voice of Fog |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Sultry Voice of Fog Quivered lips, astound the cleave of uncertainty Moved forward, to speak in the moan of time Hearing with gentle kind, the tiptoe of night Parted by moist breath, the chill of observance Instinct guides the sounds of stillness Even, as the whine of wooden walls echoes Throaty and guttural, as it makes landfall Whispering French to the low lights As if stars where the jewels of an empire Vast, the heavens part, to expose their beauty Lifting off the veil of moist air, Witness to delight the balmy breezes Set to ice, on a winter whim Copyright Kkh 12/14/08 |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
beautiful |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Most definitely sultry! |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
This is lovely, TD. Patricia |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
it is all beautiful, but these words give credence to your title: "As if stars where the jewels of an empire Vast, the heavens part, to expose their beauty Lifting off the veil of moist air, Witness to delight the balmy breezes Set to ice, on a winter whim" |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
In my mind I can ice skate.  thank you for skating with me. It is different for every reader. That is talent. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
I am always sad when that beautiful veil does lift though it reveals the clarity of a more tangible beauty |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You do know I read you with Kathleen Turner's voice in mind?  sulty indeed! I've missed you.  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
very nice |
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