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shortsleeves
Member

since 2008-10-19

Posts 125
Franklin Tennessee

0 posted 2008-11-24 11:38 AM

Dancing In A Dream
I Become A Madman
Dressed In A Divine
Question

Answers Slip Into Majestic
Enzymes Of Consciousness
That Slowly Drip
With Your Essence

Innately I Touch Our
Oneness
As Twinkling Stars
Burst With Energy

Captured In An Exotic
Transparency
My Dream Becomes
Reality

www.shortsleeves.net http://halmanogue.blogspot.com/

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

1 posted 2008-11-24 12:05 PM

Simultaneously sensual and spiritual; and literal and metaphorical - and a pleasure to read, Hal.

- Owl

shortsleeves
Member

since 2008-10-19

Posts 125
Franklin Tennessee

2 posted 2008-11-24 12:21 PM

Thank you for your awareness and our connection Owl.
Hal

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2008-11-24 06:34 PM

quote:
Dancing In A Dream
I Become A Madman
Dressed In A Divine
Question

You convey such intense emotion with this dance, dear Hal! I think we were created to dance to the harmonious tunes of life and love and you express a very captivating universal graciousness here.

It is a keeper!

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

shortsleeves
Member

since 2008-10-19

Posts 125
Franklin Tennessee

4 posted 2008-11-24 07:01 PM

Thank you Margherita. I appreciate your dance of love.
Love,
Hal

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

5 posted 2008-11-24 08:23 PM

shortsleeves - love the romance in this write, well done....

BC

shortsleeves
Member

since 2008-10-19

Posts 125
Franklin Tennessee

6 posted 2008-11-25 03:14 PM

Thanks for your thoughts Bill.
Hal

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2008-11-30 01:26 PM

Hal, I like the way you "see" ~ and the way that you dance with your pen!

Love 'n a hug,
Linda

shortsleeves
Member

since 2008-10-19

Posts 125
Franklin Tennessee

8 posted 2008-11-30 01:32 PM

Thanks Linda, I enjoy your rhythm as well.
Love,
Hal

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

9 posted 2008-12-01 12:38 PM

"Dressed In A Divine
Question"

nice touch...goes well with your 'Fragrance Lingers"...

AcousticPen
Junior Member

since 2008-12-01

Posts 13
Florida USA

10 posted 2008-12-01 03:31 AM

Dressed in a devine question. Your words truely provoke me to think in ways that most poets do, thank you for the inquisitive peice.

-Scott Vukelic

shortsleeves
Member

since 2008-10-19

Posts 125
Franklin Tennessee

11 posted 2008-12-01 09:10 AM

Thanks for your thoughts Steavenr.

Acoustic Pen, I appreciate your comments and friendship.
Hal

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

12 posted 2008-12-01 09:06 PM

Yo Shortsleeves,

The thought of this poem is good.

I don't understand all the caps.

Bobby

rhia_5779
Senior Member

since 2006-06-09

Posts 1334
California

13 posted 2008-12-01 10:20 PM

I thought the caps were a bit much but thats me since they aren't my think. This was really good though- very carefully crafted but it turned out really well. The wording is really well done and its just beautifully written! Strong write!
Rhia

shortsleeves
Member

since 2008-10-19

Posts 125
Franklin Tennessee

14 posted 2008-12-02 07:20 AM

Thanks Bobby. I appreciate your thoughts.

Thanks for your comments Rhia.
Hal

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