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| Open Poetry #43 |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
If I can paint silence, what colour would it be? It would be transparent... For I can see through myself in silence. If I can paint happiness, What colour would it be? I would paint it white... the clouds after the rainbow has left the sky. If I can paint sadness, What colour would I use? I can't discern... For I'm blind from the cries. |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
interesting write, enjoyed. |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
Wow this is amazing! I loved this, I liked how you used colors and combined them with other imagery. It was so deep and so powerful! Beautiful write! Rhia |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Nice thoughts in this but I particulary like the transparent silence. Seeing through yourself in silence actually is dead on. Enjoyed. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Interesting write, FNG. Enjoyed your thoughts. Ida |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Enjoyed the 'transparency' concept. |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
thanks all for reading...  |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thank you very much RNG, I wish I would have written this one...So enjoyable. regards yann |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very lovely emotions in colors. Love, Margherita |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
thanks islander, i think anyone can write better than me in this topic... cheers! |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Wouldn't it be nice to write a mood ring? This makes me think of the colors changing on my finger. A |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
Alison, thanks for your suggestion..maybe you can extend and do another one from this...hahaha |
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