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OwlSA
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0 posted 2008-11-24 11:24 AM


CONFLUENCE
17 August 1986

There, where I am most alone,
in sun-proof forests, in rock-wet kloofs
and in the silence of my mind,
I cannot shut you out
and so
your thoughts flow into mine.
Like ever-calling streams,
they meet and mingle and rejoice,
ever apart and ever one.
They share again
what they always shall.

- Owl

© Copyright 2008 Diana van den Berg - All Rights Reserved
shortsleeves
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1 posted 2008-11-24 11:35 AM


Beautiful connected thoughts Owl.
OwlSA
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2 posted 2008-11-24 11:55 AM


Thank you Hal, for enjoying this.  

- Owl

Marchmadness
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3 posted 2008-11-24 02:55 PM


Ithink this is so beautiful, Diana. One of your best.
                                   Ida

Margherita
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4 posted 2008-11-24 06:04 PM


Dear Diana, you conveyed this special bond in a truly magical way.

Awesome.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Bill Charles
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5 posted 2008-11-24 08:19 PM


OwlSA - you express your thoughts and feelings well...

BC

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Gaia
6 posted 2008-11-24 08:29 PM


Beautifully written!
Now, what are kloofs?

OwlSA
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7 posted 2008-11-25 12:18 PM


Thank you, Ida.  It is one of my favourites too.

Thank you, Margherita for feeling the depths of this.

Thank you, Bill for your kind words.

Thank you, Kacy!  Oops!  Yes, of course!  I didn’t realise that I had used a South African word (from the Afrikaans word of the same spelling).  It is such a common word here.  A kloof is a deep ravine.

- Owl

Oklahoma Rose
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8 posted 2008-11-25 08:35 PM


This is so beautiful.
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9 posted 2008-11-25 08:59 PM


such a beautifully, natural word painting...you reveal yourself to be a true artist...enjoyed
OwlSA
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10 posted 2008-11-26 10:59 AM


Thank you very much, Oklahoma Rose.

Thank you, Steaven.  I am honoured by your words.

- Owl

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11 posted 2008-11-26 11:46 AM


Dear Owl... This is beautiful... I love it!
inkedgoddess
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12 posted 2008-11-26 12:41 PM


the connection is solid once it is made
like tributaries of one river

OwlSA
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13 posted 2008-11-26 10:54 PM


Thank you, Ruth.  I am glad you love it.

Thank you, inkedgoddess for feeling the poem so well.  

- Owl

Earth Angel
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14 posted 2008-11-27 01:52 PM


Now that is what I would call "CLOSE"!
Your pen must surely be a feathered quill.

Love to you, Dear Diana!

Linda

OwlSA
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15 posted 2008-11-27 02:07 PM


Thanks, dear Linda, yes, we were very close!  And yes, a feathered quill, plucked from my owly breast.  Smiles.

Hugs
- Owl

poddarku
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16 posted 2008-11-28 09:23 AM


A glorious poem. It creates a world of its own."in rock-wet kloofs
and in the silence of my mind,
I cannot shut you out..."

OwlSA
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17 posted 2008-11-28 10:36 AM


Thank you Kushal for your wonderful comment.

- Owl


OwlSA
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18 posted 2008-11-28 10:36 AM


Goodbye to all my beautiful friends in Pip.  It has been wonderful knowing you.

- Owl

nakdthoughts
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19 posted 2008-11-28 06:36 PM


I really loved this one !

You have such a tenderness in your style.

M

OwlSA
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20 posted 2008-11-30 01:11 AM


Thank you, Maureen, for your kind words.  I am glad you enjoyed it so much.  

- Owl

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