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2islander2
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0 posted 2008-11-29 10:25 AM




The bird guards
the garden.
Tranquillity ,
the wind becomes statue.

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1 posted 2008-11-29 01:31 PM


What a beautiful site I saw, and wished I was sitting on a bench right there.

        

Huan Yi
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2 posted 2008-11-29 02:26 PM


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Good Yann

John

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2islander2
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3 posted 2008-11-29 02:27 PM


Thank you so much Mysteria for leaving a so kind comment.

regards

  yann

2islander2
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4 posted 2008-11-29 02:29 PM


Hi John,  I consider that you inspire all the short poems I write, you gave me the teaching and the example and I so loved it that I like doing ilke.

regards

yann

Margherita
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5 posted 2008-11-29 02:37 PM


Very enjoyable, dear Yann!
Love,
Margherita

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
6 posted 2008-11-29 04:25 PM


Very serene
2islander2
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7 posted 2008-11-29 07:34 PM


THank you very much Margherita.

hugs

yann

2islander2
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8 posted 2008-11-29 07:36 PM


Thank you Mark, it was exactly the atmosphere of the scene and the so obvious feelings of the bird (I could saw it).

regards

yann

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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9 posted 2008-11-30 04:38 AM


just beautiful Yann... you have gifted us with some wonderful poetry of late!!  merci beaucoup!  love and hugs RDB

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