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Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

0 posted 2008-11-23 10:18 PM

Bones thanks God
for his beloved Griselda.

She’s not only a beautiful,
caring,
and affectionate person,
that loves him for what he is,
she’s also knowledgeable
about the world,
and what is in it.

Bones will learn a great deal
from his beloved Griselda,
before he’s brutally snatched away
for his final journey home.

Bobby

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

1 posted 2008-11-23 10:21 PM

Makes me want to know more about her

Juli

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2008-11-23 10:43 PM

Bobby - I do like your 'Bones' series of poems, always something to learn in them...

BC

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

3 posted 2008-11-23 10:54 PM

Thanks dear Juli,

Here is my original poem about Griselda.  I hope you like it.  It will tell you about Griselda.

Griselda means a lot to me, as well as Bones.

Love Bobby

"Bones, Butch, and Wawa,
they’re wolves on the prowl.

Slinking down the strip,
they’re looking for game.

Well past midnight,
they drop in on
“The Foxy Lady”,
looking for that Fox.

Skinny little Griselda’s
up on the platform,
she’s doing the bump and grind.

She’s too thin for Butch and Wawa,
but she’s just right for Bones.

Bones motions Griselda over,
slips a “C”-note in her “G” string,
and says he’ll meet her after work.

Griselda smiles,
and says okay.

Griselda has eyes for Bones."

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

4 posted 2008-11-23 10:56 PM

Thanks Bill,

I'm very pleased you enjoy my "Bones" poems.

Thank you for the very kind words.

Bobby

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

5 posted 2008-11-23 11:42 PM

Bones and Griselda... I think they were meant to be Bobby

loved this one.. love and hugs RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

6 posted 2008-11-23 11:47 PM

Some how I think that makes the story more intriguing, unless you dislike my opinion(:. I really hope you publish your poems they are so addictive.

Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2008-11-24 02:11 AM

Wonderful...James

nourzihane
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since 2008-07-10

Posts 254
Algeria

8 posted 2008-11-24 04:42 AM

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

9 posted 2008-11-24 07:58 AM

Thanks dear RDB,

Yes, Griselda and Bones made a lovely couple.

Love Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

10 posted 2008-11-24 08:03 AM

Thanks dear Juli,

I'm pleased this one worked for you. I always value your opinion. Four of my other books are avaliable at Amazon.com.

Love Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

11 posted 2008-11-24 08:04 AM

Thanks James,

I'm very happy you enjoyed the read.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

12 posted 2008-11-24 08:05 AM

Thanks dear Nourzihane,

I enjoyed the flowers.

Love Bobby

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