Open Poetry #43 |
Bones Beloved Griselda |
Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Bones thanks God for his beloved Griselda. She’s not only a beautiful, caring, and affectionate person, that loves him for what he is, she’s also knowledgeable about the world, and what is in it. Bones will learn a great deal from his beloved Griselda, before he’s brutally snatched away for his final journey home. Bobby |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Makes me want to know more about her Juli -Juju |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Bobby - I do like your 'Bones' series of poems, always something to learn in them... BC |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Juli, Here is my original poem about Griselda. I hope you like it. It will tell you about Griselda. Griselda means a lot to me, as well as Bones. Love Bobby "Bones, Butch, and Wawa, they’re wolves on the prowl. Slinking down the strip, they’re looking for game. Well past midnight, they drop in on “The Foxy Lady”, looking for that Fox. Skinny little Griselda’s up on the platform, she’s doing the bump and grind. She’s too thin for Butch and Wawa, but she’s just right for Bones. Bones motions Griselda over, slips a “C”-note in her “G” string, and says he’ll meet her after work. Griselda smiles, and says okay. Griselda has eyes for Bones." Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Bill, I'm very pleased you enjoy my "Bones" poems. Thank you for the very kind words. Bobby |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Bones and Griselda... I think they were meant to be Bobby loved this one.. love and hugs RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Some how I think that makes the story more intriguing, unless you dislike my opinion(:. I really hope you publish your poems they are so addictive. Juju -Juju |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...James |
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nourzihane Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 254Algeria |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear RDB, Yes, Griselda and Bones made a lovely couple. Love Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Juli, I'm pleased this one worked for you. I always value your opinion. Four of my other books are avaliable at Amazon.com. Love Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks James, I'm very happy you enjoyed the read. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Nourzihane, I enjoyed the flowers. Love Bobby |
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