navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #43 » Surprise
Open Poetry #43
Post A Reply Post New Topic Surprise Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
The Shadow in Blue
Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493
EL, Michigan

0 posted 2008-11-23 08:47 PM


Fragile, calloused hands
tremble at your tender touch
startled from their silent melancholy

© Copyright 2008 Jill Slamka - All Rights Reserved
Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2008-11-23 09:16 PM


Yo dear The Shadow in Blue,

This very interesting poem has a number of possible interpretations.  That makes it not only a surprise, but a mystery.

Love Bobby


The Shadow in Blue
Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493
EL, Michigan
2 posted 2008-11-23 09:18 PM


That was my goal Bobby. Art imitates life.
Thanks for reading.

J.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
3 posted 2008-11-23 10:39 PM


The Shadow in Blue - I believe this is the first writing of yours I've read, waiting for more, nice write...

BC

nourzihane
Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 254
Algeria
4 posted 2008-11-24 05:40 AM



Pantheress
Member
since 2008-11-02
Posts 215
Queensland, Australia
5 posted 2008-11-24 07:53 AM


Short on words, powerful on effect and response, wonderful, thanks for sharing..
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #43 » Surprise

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary