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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2008-11-23 05:53 PM


Illusory Sunset

Linger longer, mauve moments and quivering lips
Dispersed on the seasons, of time’s hourglass hips
Fallen in billows, round the knees of what has come
Favored fabrics in gather, pleat in pardon outdone
Colors brightest, cinched tightest on the waistcoat of morn
Unreliable, shyness sent in fated adorn
In the sigh of the whispering woods heard to say
What was once has now slept through the winter’s delay
Sense the subtle life beat of the wind and the rain
Come together in harmony, a replenished refrain
Be thee twilight, or sunrise, as their twin only knows
When the heart is wide open, ne’er the difference dispose

Copyright Kkh 11/23/08


© Copyright 2008 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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1 posted 2008-11-23 06:39 PM


quote:
Sense the subtle life beat of the wind and the rain
Come together in harmony, a replenished refrain
Be thee twilight, or sunrise, as their twin only knows
When the heart is wide open, ne’er the difference dispose




Ahhhhhh, you are pure beauty and harmony, dear Kathleen!

Wonderful!

Love,
Margherita

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
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2 posted 2008-11-23 08:28 PM


graphically beautiful...such a picture-perfect write...you never fail to amaze
Bill Charles
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3 posted 2008-11-23 10:38 PM


ThisDiamond - congratulations, another fabulous writing...

BC

amusemi
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4 posted 2008-11-24 08:14 AM


Beautifully crafted piece...
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