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Improving New Member
since 2008-11-08
Posts 8 |
Ok, this one's a bit of a weird, sinister one so just tread carefully here. The crocodile lays, With his eyes in the water, Lying in wait, Ready for the slaughter. Some might think he's violent, But they misunderstand, He survives the same as we do, Out on our land. We kill other creatures, For ourselves to eat, We are just as violent, As those creatures who eat meat. Thankyou for taking the time to read my poem! I'm still Improving! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
As a vegetarian I thank you for this though I don't feel holier than thou because of it either. Happy thanksgiving spare the rod save a turkey this year  |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Of course you are right, Melissa, but the crocodiles don't say please and thank you and wipe the blood off their chin with a linen napkin. Ida |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
good one keep it up. avoid using ing type verbs the detracts from the poem. cant wait to see more -Juju |
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Improving New Member
since 2008-11-08
Posts 8 |
Thankyou everyone. That one was a bit weird, so dont be afraid to say you dont like it. And Ida, thats because they cant talk and they dont have napkins, lol. |
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