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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Traceless our lives are ultimately traceless… as the path of every cloud in a boundless sky, and each flake of snow among a thousand brethren, or all the fluid moments that drop into eternity… our finest dreams vanishing like smoke and shadows in the moonlit wind. --- b. e. adams (11/23/08) [This message has been edited by secondhanddreampoet (11-23-2008 12:06 AM).] |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
I like this...nice write. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I'm hearing "Dust in the wind" playing in the background. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
secondhanddreampoet - our finest dreams vanishing like smoke and shadows in the moonlit wind. Yes, I find this to be true, many fine thoughts here... BC |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Exquisitely beautiful, but so sad. I wish you didn't feel that way. - Owl |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
lovely write...beautiful pics in your careful words...so well done... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Melancholic yet so captivating! If those "moments do drop into eternity ..." they are not undone. Love, Margherita |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
It's hard to imagine that thoughts and words such as these could ever just vanish. I guess that's what gives me hope. Ida |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hi Bruce, the truth shines in the deep of your exalting poem. thanks yann |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
This made me sigh... gently, contently. Beautiful! Great writing. ~alyssa Hupomeno. |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
I've missed reading you .. I'll have to make time to come around more often *smiles* lovely write  ~Sheli~ It's psychosomatic. You need a lobotomy. I'll get a saw |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Bruce, Lovely like a whisper as time passes and leaves behind beauty. Alison |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
unless, your born again..! dale |
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