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icebox
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in the shadows

0 posted 2008-11-21 05:12 PM





in a tiger's waltz

passion fills staid flower's cup

love's tears lost in rain

©2008 by icebox

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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
1 posted 2008-11-21 10:12 PM


compelling petals
I am just a simple one
rain comes to heal me

Margherita
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Eternity
2 posted 2008-11-22 02:07 AM


Oh, Charly, how touchingly beautiful!

Love,
Margherita

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
3 posted 2008-11-22 06:10 PM


icebox - nice write with few words...

BC

Pilgrimage
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4 posted 2008-11-22 07:43 PM


November flowers
butterfly wilts on dried stalk
brittle barren rain

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Marchmadness
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5 posted 2008-11-23 12:51 PM


Enjoyed.
     Ida

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
6 posted 2008-11-23 09:39 AM


"love's tears lost in rain"

I often wonder~~
M

Magnus
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7 posted 2008-11-23 11:43 AM


well said, sir!!!
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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8 posted 2008-11-24 05:21 AM


Mr C.. this is very very beautiful!!  love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

steavenr
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9 posted 2008-11-24 02:24 PM


lots of levels in this creatively beautiful write...love it
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