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Forever Us |
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ms robey Junior Member
since 2008-11-18
Posts 25davenport iowa |
Me and you You and me, Together until Eternity. Side by side Hand and hand, Forever your woman always my man. We once were lovers now the best of friends, We stuck it out through thick and thin. So glad you came into my life, I hope in time I'll be your wife. And this pure love is more than lust, You and me Forever Us. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh this is just lovely! I'm not sure if I have welcomed you yet? a big warm down under welcome to our pages blue Ms Robey...  love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very lovely, dear Tanya! Love, Margherita |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I like your faithfulnes to your rhyme scheme and your subject. Nicely done, with a good payoff at the end. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Tony123 Junior Member
since 2008-11-20
Posts 10 |
Beautiful! |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
The poem is absolutely perfect and it's rythm is excellent as well. |
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