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Two Roses Of Red
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Two Roses Of Red |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Two roses two hearts one love beautiful colors rise with your words |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Tis romance in the air of the blue pages and you convey it so well. Beautifully illustrated in words and tone sir. Take a bow. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A passionate and fine piece of romantic writing, Bill. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...James |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
This is absolutely beautiful, Bill. Both, the picture and the poem. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Bill, what a sparkling presentation for this tender and passionate write. A joy to read and savor. Love, Margherita  |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
there is some kind of beauty and hot here....thank you for the wonderful piece and lovely write.... regards yann |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
beautiful thoughts in beautiful words...simply lovely |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
inkedgoddess - these words said from you touch me, thank you... Mark - Your comments are deeply appreciated, and inspiring. Midnitesun - I'm glad you stopped by, and thank you for a warm reply. James - always nice to see your replies... Margherita - I cherish your kind words, thank you... 2islander2 - I'm glad to see that you felt the beauty, and I thank you for your reply.... steavenr - You're vey kind with your reply, appreciate it... BC |
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Sharon Rose Member
since 2008-11-03
Posts 51 |
I always enjoy your poems, can't wait for the next one |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Stunning...as always. You have a blessed romantic heart and she is one lucky lady! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a lovely presentation Bill... reminds me of my "Only One Rose" written so long ago Only One Rose Even though hot, as I sat, came a breeze. The trees softly swaying in dance. Wildflowers, sweet scents and roses in bloom, Waiting their pick, if by chance To be placed on buffet, with mirror behind, Reflections of beauty in red. Each time passing, thoughts rise in my mind Of the first time these eyes had been fed, With the bloom, one of love and the tenderness felt When petals had opened at last. Alone in it's holder of crystal and gold A picture of splendor, it cast. Just one lonely rose, so soft, yet intense, To share with my eyes, splendid view. Endearing and special when only one rose, Came delivered to me, just from you. M |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You write of love's mystery with an experienced heart. Petals soft, fragrance rare and words of gentle longing. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Bill, This is a very good romantic poem. I wish I could write like that. Bobby |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
amusemi - your kind words bring inspiration, as all here do. Not sure where the romance is lurking, but I love writing about her... Maureen - a heart lonely once, yet intense, a rose came to me, and I was once again alive. Thank you for your beautiful reply... ThisDiamond - your words are very gratifying, and kind. Thank you for coming by... Bobby - thank you for reading this one. You will write like that, keep writing and let your heart guide your pen... BC |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
lovely Bill Charles.. you gift us with such beauty of your work.. enjoyed.. love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Pantheress Member
since 2008-11-02
Posts 215Queensland, Australia |
So beautifully you write.. I love your work, thank you |
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Sharon Rose Member
since 2008-11-03
Posts 51 |
A rose says it all.love it, cherish it nourish it ,it yours. with all beauty comes thorns. |
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