Fatal Consequence For Simple Sins

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Open Poetry #43

Fatal Consequence For Simple Sins

GothicCherry
Member

since 2008-09-16

Posts 471
TN

0 posted 2008-11-20 10:16 PM

Increasing Rumors In Default
To The Day And Age I Am
Absurd Insubordinate Assaults
The World’s Undeniable Scam

People’s Words Are Sharpened Spears
With Shiny Platinum Tips
The Spears Cause Pain And Tears
Yet They Still Fire From Our lips

A Time Will Come When It Shall End
The Way Words Control Life Or Death
Drama’s Antecedent Is A Lot To Defend
When Life Is Taken By Only Breath

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

1 posted 2008-11-21 06:36 AM

people's words...

just lick them and stick them on your hip..

like a tattoo that you sit on..

enjoyed it ms

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

2 posted 2008-11-21 06:59 PM

Wow, nice poem, I just love the words you choose. Good diction!

"Life is too confusing, but I like it that way!"

GothicCherry
Member

since 2008-09-16

Posts 471
TN

3 posted 2008-11-23 03:33 PM

DS, you crack me up with your genius responses to everything. LOL!

freeand2sexy, thanks yet again. I have been trying to extend my vocabulary lately so I'm grateful for your comment.

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