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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2008-11-20 09:28 PM

It should have been
my dance
when the caller
called
"gentlemen pick a lovely lassie"

I wanted to blind you
in a permanent flash
of blonde

it should of been
my hand
to be taken

but instead
you preferred the gal
with the tresses
of brown.

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (11-21-2008 12:28 PM).]

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2008-11-20 09:32 PM

Yo dear Inkedgoddess,

I like this poem. Hang in there hon, he'll get tired of mousy brown.

Bobby

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2008-11-20 09:36 PM

I bet Miss Mousy didn't have a book of poetry published like the blond goddess has! Your book has arrived and I'm thrilled with it!

Linda

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

3 posted 2008-11-20 09:52 PM

nice write...puts a whole new perspective on blonds having more fun, though

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

4 posted 2008-11-20 10:21 PM

inkedgoddess - why any one would turn down a dance with you is beyond me. Am I correct in saying you have published a book of poetry. If so, how did you do it. Do you have a publisher, or did you do it yourself...

BC

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

5 posted 2008-11-20 11:41 PM

I'm with Bill...enquiring minds wanna know! Congrats BTW!...and great poem, he'll regret it someday!

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

6 posted 2008-11-20 11:44 PM

.

Excellant

Simple as that . . .

John
.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

7 posted 2008-11-21 08:53 AM

Thanks kids
Just want to clarify in case my brunette sisters read..No knock on brunettes or redheads at all, just a blonde on the loose wanting to cha cha with the man in blue.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

8 posted 2008-11-21 10:59 AM

quote:
I wanted to blind you
in a permanent flash
of blonde

And blinded he was!

Very cute!

Love,
Margherita

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

9 posted 2008-11-21 12:24 PM

As always, nice flow in this one and this cowboy would cha cha with you anytime. I enjoyed. Might I suggest you check the spelling on your title.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

10 posted 2008-11-21 12:28 PM

why thank you cowboy
i just looked

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

11 posted 2008-11-21 03:01 PM

This is why I am auburn.

and men are fickle.

yes I said it out loud.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

12 posted 2008-11-24 02:59 PM

Dear heavens, can I ever identify... and is it ever an OUCH! *S*

Excellent verse!!

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

13 posted 2008-12-01 02:10 AM

This is perfect. Wonderful writing - I saved it.

Alison

Oklahoma Rose
Senior Member

since 2008-02-28

Posts 1586
Oklahoma USA

14 posted 2008-12-01 09:09 PM

Awwww, how sad this is. Well my friend, it was his loss.

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

15 posted 2008-12-01 09:24 PM

that man in blue
needs his eyes and
his heart checked

love ya baby

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