Open Poetry #43 |
When I Was Teaching You |
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Love it, Bill~~~ a beautiful poem display M |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Maureen - thank you for the comments. I need to find a way to decrease the size of the posting, just a little too large. Next one perhaps... Happy Thanksgiving BC |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Great poem Bill, sensuous and sweet, Have a great day my friend. Lindsay |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
The teacher becoming the student and the student becoming the teacher. Now that is a class on love that I would like to attend! Linda |
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Lady Ayla Member
since 2008-07-19
Posts 84WV, United States |
The end was an "Aww" moment. It's a really nice poem. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
cool pic (you've become an expert), tender words, with such a powerful ending...fantastic write |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Nice poem, Bill. Love the title. Ida |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I believe you have found one of the true meanings of love. Beautiful write with lots of sentiment. |
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shortsleeves Member
since 2008-10-19
Posts 125Franklin Tennessee |
Lessons in love. Well done Bill. Thanks, Hal |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Bill this is just beautiful - who is that art by as well please, it is incredible? The words and art are a perfect match. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
bc this is awesome |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Very nice, Bill. I know just how you feel. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Bill Charles.. such beauty in your work.. loved this... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hi Bill; this is one of the most touching and convincing poem I ever read, simplicity and truth, I think when you teach you learn, this is really great about love. regards yann |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Bill, this is deeply captivating and beautiful. In expressing love, love unveils itself. You choose an awesome picture too. A gratefulness is woven into your words, that makes them all the more attractive. Love and joy. Margherita |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
The poem speak with an open heart and vulnerable spot within us that some are fearful of teaching or reaching. Very warmly worded |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Absolutely beautiful, Bill. *S* |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
To All: Wow, I don't know what to say about all the gracious comments to this write, thank you, thank you, from me to you. BC |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Bill, Nice work pal. This is a very romantically beautiful picture poem combination. Bobby |
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