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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2008-11-27 07:00 PM


When I Was Teaching You

© Copyright 2008 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2008-11-27 07:24 PM


Love it, Bill~~~ a beautiful poem display

M

Bill Charles
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2 posted 2008-11-27 07:46 PM


Maureen - thank you for the comments. I need to find a way to decrease the size of the posting, just a little too large. Next one perhaps...

Happy Thanksgiving

BC

LindsayP
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3 posted 2008-11-27 07:48 PM



Great poem Bill, sensuous and sweet,
Have a great day my friend.

Lindsay

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2008-11-27 09:30 PM


The teacher becoming the student and the student becoming the teacher. Now that is
a class on love that I would like to attend!


Linda

Lady Ayla
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5 posted 2008-11-27 09:32 PM


The end was an "Aww" moment. It's a really nice poem.
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6 posted 2008-11-27 09:42 PM


cool pic (you've become an expert), tender words, with such a powerful ending...fantastic write
Marchmadness
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7 posted 2008-11-28 12:03 PM


Nice poem, Bill. Love the title.
                           Ida

Mark Bohannan
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8 posted 2008-11-28 02:55 PM


I believe you have found one of the true meanings of love.  Beautiful write with lots of sentiment.  
shortsleeves
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9 posted 2008-11-28 04:05 PM


Lessons in love. Well done Bill.
Thanks,
Hal

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10 posted 2008-11-28 04:15 PM


Bill this is just beautiful - who is that art by as well please, it is incredible?  The words and art are a perfect match.
1slick_lady
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11 posted 2008-11-28 05:55 PM


bc this is awesome
Oklahoma Rose
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12 posted 2008-11-28 05:58 PM


Very nice, Bill. I know just how you feel.
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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13 posted 2008-11-29 06:34 AM


Bill Charles.. such beauty in your work.. loved this... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

2islander2
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14 posted 2008-11-29 08:23 AM


Hi Bill; this is one of the most touching and convincing poem I ever read, simplicity and truth, I think when you teach you learn, this is really great about love.

regards

  yann

Margherita
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15 posted 2008-11-29 09:26 AM


Dear Bill, this is deeply captivating and beautiful. In expressing love, love unveils itself.

You choose an awesome picture too.

A gratefulness is woven into your words, that makes them all the more attractive.

Love and joy.
Margherita


inkedgoddess
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16 posted 2008-11-29 03:48 PM


The poem speak with an open heart and vulnerable spot within us that some are fearful of teaching or reaching.
Very warmly worded

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17 posted 2008-12-01 05:40 PM


Absolutely beautiful, Bill. *S*
Bill Charles
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18 posted 2008-12-01 06:34 PM


To All:

Wow, I don't know what to say about all the gracious comments to this write, thank you, thank you, from me to you.

BC

Robert E. Jordan
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19 posted 2008-12-01 08:57 PM


Yo Bill,

Nice work pal.  This is a very romantically beautiful picture poem combination.

Bobby

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