Open Poetry #43 |
Big Brother |
TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569 |
Big brother TALL Big brother STRONG You protected us Stood up for us Comforted us Loved us Made us feel safe in a world out of control Now I want to stand up for you To comfort you and love you I want to tell you that it will be okay That I know how you feel The pain so deep, so raw, so burning you just want it to end Big brother TALL Big brother STRONG I love you |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear TinaTrivett, This is a lovely poem, and picture. He is a big guy. Love Bobby |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Tina, this is such a special show of love, support, understanding, respect, and compassion for your TALL, STRONG, big brother! May all be well for him ~ and for you. A beautiful spill of pink ink from your loving heart. Linda |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"Made us feel safe in a world out of control" everyone needs someone like this in their life that they can count on...even better to reciprocate the feeling with...good write |
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TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569 |
Thanks so much. Yes, my big strong brother is hurting right now and I'm 1,000 miles away. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
A thousand miles away and yet still with him. The picture is perfect and says a million words... |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Tina, This so reminds me of my big brother and me. I miss him every day - and he is always and forever my big brother. Love, Alison |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Touching words, Tina. I'll say a prayer for you and your brother. Ida |
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TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569 |
Thanks so much everyone. I'll be going home after Thanksgiving to go see him. Your prayers and energy are amazing, thank you. |
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