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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Today we bury the autumn… Behind the hearse walks the winter with pensive steps, the spring follows with arrogant clothes, then the most sad, the summer because only he bequeathed his fortune. Birds pray and people get muffled up…. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Uniquely creative ~ and clever!  Linda |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I would never have thought of this. I'm awestruck by the notion, and envious of the execution. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Beautifully written and very creative in the thinking. Much worth a few more reads to completely absorb it's beauty and so glad I caught this one. |
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Tony123 Junior Member
since 2008-11-20
Posts 10 |
Beautiful!  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
2islander2 - more than once I read this, and each time was better than the one before... BC |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"the summer because only he bequeathed his fortune" interesting write based on an intriguing theme...nicely done |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Yann, loved the uncommon visuals here! Beautiful write! Love, Margherita |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Oh, Yann, I love this - every little bit of it, all the way through and backwards and forwards again and again and again! - Owl |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
This is so creative, yann. I think it is one of your best. Ida |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Good Yann John . |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
This is wonderful Yann!! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thank you everyone for the kindness of the comments, I have been touched.... regards yann |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
This is a very original way to see the onset of winter. Well written, yann. Thank you for sharing. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Tahnk you Alison, I have seen a corean movie called Spring, summer, autumn, winter....And spring...It is awesome, I guess without my consent it inspired me... regards yann |
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