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Open Poetry #43

Tree and Autumn Wind

Spuddette
Member

since 2008-07-03

Posts 112
England

0 posted 2008-11-20 05:54 PM

She blushes to her tickling tips
as the autumn wind
breaths on her statuesque limbs.
Summers last flicker
deep within his steely gaze
the Steve McQueen of weather
mean and moody autumn wind
moves through her mellow days
teases the leaves of her modesty
in a wanton spin.
She shivers at the magnificence of him.

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

1 posted 2008-11-20 06:31 PM

"the Steve McQueen of weather"

cool phrase...neat for a cool write...enjoyed

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

2 posted 2008-11-20 08:22 PM

This is so cool. So Steve McQueen, who was Cool and cold at the same time.

Ida

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2008-11-20 09:00 PM

My dear Spuddette, your name is as creatively original as this autumnal gem of a poem! I loved it and am saving it!

Giving you a big, warm hug!
Earth Angel

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