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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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there were always arrows in our sand like scattered grass without wind and you looked for cupids with bows but found only the fences instead like the smooth stones on parade and wise men in straight white rows and who dreams these dreams of love was your question mark as a tattoo made in lipstick on my new white shirt you closed open your eyes then and listened to the sand pretending it was just another day of rain and that my hands were your only rivers _______________ daark |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"you closed open your eyes then and listened to the sand pretending it was just another day of rain and that my hands were your only rivers" I would LOVE another day of rain please  oh I should say can you make it rain here?! very much enjoyed this D  |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
This is pretty. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suesea...waving my magic wand...thanks babe _____________ GC..thank you for the pretty reply |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: That's a woman's priority ... almost always! Such a delicate, sensitive, beautiful vision to begin with, dear D.! Love the title too. You are so cute. Love, Margherita |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Properly presented and conveyed. I do still wonder why the marksman with the bow has to wear a diaper though. Hidden meaning he isn't telling us????? hmmmm Seeing your perspective on life is always inspiring. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar...thanks so much lady friend! _______________ mark, thanks guy...I agree it does seem the little bugger has a double meaning |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
you make me tingle with pinpricks |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
drawn in by the title...captured by the content...another thing of beauty...enjoyed |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms inky...you make my pen whet with wanting ______________ steavenr, thanks amigo. |
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Pantheress Member
since 2008-11-02
Posts 215Queensland, Australia |
I really liked this poem, Thanks for sharing this with me,smiles.. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
a pleasure ms Pantheress, thank you |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
silent you hunt me with the obsidian cut of your word arrows. Loved this, D. Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms indi...silently as always...waiting for you to prey thanks ms |
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