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Open Poetry #43

Until the end of time

ms robey
Junior Member

since 2008-11-18

Posts 25
davenport iowa

0 posted 2008-11-23 01:15 AM

Every time I see you
my heart just skips a beat,
I wonder how you manage
to just sweep me off my feet.
My body seems to shiver
whenever you're around,
Send such a shock throughout my soul
and lift me off the ground.
Your presence is so amazing
Your heart's as good as gold,
I heard that love don't cost a thing
You still have got me sold.
I've climbed the highest mountain
I've swam the widest sea,
I gave my heart and soul to you
because you set me free.
If I should ever loose you
it would be no fault of mine,
I'll love you until the day I die
Until the end of time.

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

1 posted 2008-11-23 01:24 AM

Wonderful cadence in this. I have read your posts, and you express emotion very well. Nice job!

taviaomi
New Member

since 2008-11-23

Posts 1

2 posted 2008-11-23 02:06 PM

This is a wonderful way to express yourself when your enlove.....Be happy and enjoy yourself!!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2008-11-24 09:26 PM

Nice...James

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