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In Heaven I'll Wait
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In Heaven I'll Wait |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed the Vivid Write Bill!  ARCTIC WIND |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Very pretty, Bill!  And you are a better person than I--I'm such an impatient person that anyplace I have to wait? tsk.. quickly becomes hell for everybody. *smile* It's on my list of "work on that"s...  Great to read you again m'friend! |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
nice romantic write with an excellent theme...proof that patience can truly be a virtue |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
beautiful! The only time we waste is the time we spend thinking we are alone. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bill darling man how gorgeous to see your words scattered across the page like precious gems. Beautiful, absolutely beautiful. I wish I could write even half a sentence that sparkles as do each word of yours. Take care of you for you are special As always Mushy x x x x x x x Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hi Charles, your words wet my eyes...Poignant love indeed...Thank you very much. yann |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
A love for all time. Very romantic. Enjoyed Janette always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
That's love..the thoughts, words, picture and message. A joy to read. God bless, Rae |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Artic Wind - thanks for coming by for a read... serenity blaze - I'm just a person, no better, no worse than others. Patience at times I lack also, so don't feel bad. Thank you for your comments... steavenr - Yes, at times patience is a virtue, especially in this write. Appreciate the warm comments... Ceinwyn - thank you... Mushy - it's been a long time, you make me sigh with your words, very gracious, thank you... BC |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
JamesMichael - thank you for the comment... 2islander2 - your words touch me, thank you... Janette - eternity is the love romantic to hope for... sandgrain - thank you for your warm reply, it's appreciated... BC |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Delicately intense, dear Bill, just beautiful. In heaven there is no time, so the waiting might be perceived just as a split second. Very lovely presentation too! Love, Margherita |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Bill, This is a neat picture, poem combination. Bobby |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
The joy in this one is absolutely infectious -- which is of course the essence of a love poem. Beautifully done! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Pantheress Member
since 2008-11-02
Posts 215Queensland, Australia |
This poem is so beautiful, thank you for sharing,smiles.. |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Wow! This is very pretty. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Margherita - Yes, there is no timeframe in heaven, but I would wait one day no matter how long or short it may be. You're very gracious, thank you... Bobby - thanks for reading this writing... Ratleader - I appreciate you coming by and for your gracious reply. Thank you... Pantheress - I'm glad you enjoyed this write, and thank you for your reply... Oklahoma Rose - Glad you liked it, love doing those graphics, and poems... BC |
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Sharon Rose Member
since 2008-11-03
Posts 51 |
Bill. all love waits in heaven |
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