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shortsleeves
Member

since 2008-10-19

Posts 125
Franklin Tennessee

0 posted 2008-11-18 03:12 PM

I Paint In Fragments
That Change
In Contrast

I Move From Canvas
To Canvas Expressing
The Desire
To Be A Conscious Painting
Of Inner Consciousness

The Ink Well
Of Acceptance Dries
In The Air
Of Separation

My Brush Dips
Itself in Blood
As Mental Enzymes
Turn Into Human Thoughts

Copied From Memory
Unique Mysteries Drizzle
My Outer Edges
With Magical Desires

Fresh Beliefs Become
A Colorful Vibration
Of Expression
And My Nucleus
Entertains
A Family Of
Nuances
That Shade Themselves
In Dreams

An Art Form
Of Timeless Motion
Captures My Multiplicity
In Free Style
And I Rest
On An Easel
Of Eternity

[This message has been edited by shortsleeves (11-18-2008 05:08 PM).]

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2008-11-18 04:52 PM

I love that last stanza. What an enjoyable read!

shortsleeves
Member

since 2008-10-19

Posts 125
Franklin Tennessee

2 posted 2008-11-18 05:09 PM

I appreciate your thoughts and your support Midnitesun.
Hal

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2008-11-18 05:41 PM

shortsleeves - enjoying reading this, especially these words,,

And I Rest
On An Easel
Of Eternity

Very nicely done,

BC

shortsleeves
Member

since 2008-10-19

Posts 125
Franklin Tennessee

4 posted 2008-11-18 06:54 PM

Thanks Bill. I appreciate your comments.
Hal

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

5 posted 2008-11-18 10:16 PM

I really like this one. You are an artist, truly indeed.

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

6 posted 2008-11-18 11:03 PM

great imagery...very artistic indeed...excellent craftsmanship

Pantheress
Member

since 2008-11-02

Posts 215
Queensland, Australia

7 posted 2008-11-19 01:53 AM

This was nice to read, Thank you for sharing this with me,smiles..

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

8 posted 2008-11-19 05:58 AM

quote:
Fresh Beliefs Become
A Colorful Vibration
Of Expression
And My Nucleus
Entertains
A Family Of
Nuances
That Shade Themselves
In Dreams

An Art Form
Of Timeless Motion
Captures My Multiplicity
In Free Style
And I Rest
On An Easel
Of Eternity

Your poem reads like a meditation, dear Hal, and it unveils intense beauty with every single word and the conclusion makes me want to just SIGH in awe.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

shortsleeves
Member

since 2008-10-19

Posts 125
Franklin Tennessee

9 posted 2008-11-19 06:42 AM

I Thank all of you for your gracious comments and thoughts. Your input is appreciated and respected.
Love,
Hal

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